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Why Do Authors Kill Off Good Characters? (The rotten meanies)

6/13/2013

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I was on facebook the other day (okay, I'm on there EVERY day, but still...) when a group of fiction writers I follow started a long thread discussing the act of killing off characters in their novels. The person who started the thread had a bone to pick (paraphrasing here): "Why do authors insist on killing off their characters? Why do they do this? I believe in happily-ever-after and don't want to read these kinds of books. It's depressing. Just let the characters be!"

That got me thinking...really? No books with any character deaths? Again I say, really? That makes no sense to me. Many of those that responded made statements that most often times the death of a character is necessary to the progression of the story (which I agree with) but the original poster wouldn't have anything to do with that. She simply wanted NO death and believed that most authors do it for the shock value. And the kicker, there were other responders that agreed with her! Yes, they did! "They're doing it just because they can", "They're not taking into account their readers feelings!"

That got me thinking again...do I kill off characters to shock my readers? Am I not taking my readers feelings into account? Am I doing it just because I can?

OH, HECK NO! Whenever I choose death for one of my characters, I don't do it willy-nilly (yep, I like that word. It's awesome), especially when I've invested a lot of time developing those characters. I love my characters. I really do, so to put them (and myself) through something so devastating, there better be a good reason for it.

I write about zombies in The Wild West. Characters are bound to die. I can't have a trilogy and NOT have a character get eaten, that would be weird. Someone would call me out on that.

I would like to hope other authors think this same way. They're not out to kill of characters "because they can", but because it is necessary for the story. Do readers get mad about character deaths? Yep, they do. There have been cases where authors have had to go back and rewrite a book, bringing a character back from the dead, to please the masses who protested such a move (it has happened more often that you know).

Here's the thing: As a writer it is my job to get a reader invested in ALL the characters, so when that character dies, the reader will be emotional and saddened because of it. That's what a good writer does. Do we want you to be heartbroken? Yes. Do we want you to feel horrible for the other characters involved? Yes. Are we doing it to torture you? No, of course not.

1) Killing off a character has to have purpose. You don't want the reader to be numb to it.
2) Killing of a characters has to propel the plot or affect the arc of another character.
3) Too many deaths and the readers will no longer trust the writer and will refuse to bond with any of the characters for fear of them being chopped. (A big example of this is THE WALKING DEAD. I for one, no longer invest any emotions in the characters, especially any new ones. The writers kill them off left and right. Think about it: only Carol is left of the original females from season one. And what about Axel? I liked that prisoner. Shoot. Anyhoo...moving on).
4) Let there be an aftermath. Let the other characters explore their feelings over the death and give the reader a chance to understand its purpose.
5) The whole point is to get the reader to care about the characters so their death does have an impact on them. Throwaway characters are just that--throwaways. No reader will care about those deaths, but a main character...that has to mean something.
6) Keep in mind that when you kill of a beloved character there will be some aftermath. Readers will have favorite characters and will be heartbroken, but as long as there is a purpose and a reason, most readers will get through it and be understanding.

In DEAD PLAINS, two beloved characters will die. I knew at least one death would happen while I was writing book one. The other surprised even me, but needed to happen to show the growth process for one of my main characters who had never experienced such a loss.

I didn't write the deaths willy-nilly. I'd never write a characters death that way.
That's not the kind of writer I am. And even though I enjoy a good happily-ever-after, I know that life has it's ups and downs and so that's what I write.

So what do you think about character deaths? How does it make you feel? Do you steer clear of them? Does it make you angry when a beloved character dies in a novel? What say you? Leave a comment.

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AJ Sikes link
6/13/2013 01:22:18 pm

I read all the flak about GRRM whacking his characters and I have to shake my head. Let the man write his stories! I don't think he's doing it to torture anyone, just as you say. Maybe he's done it too much and people are beginning to enter his books with reservations, like you and TWD. But I think every death in a story serves a purpose for the story. If it didn't, the editor would have culled the scene, advised the writer to think again, etc.

Maybe I'm assuming too much about editors, but a good one knows what a story needs, and often knows better than the writer. I wouldn't be surprised if GRRM's editor(s) suggested some of the killings.

Anyway, on to your other questions. I don't steer clear of killing characters in my writing. If it needs to happen for the story to progress, for the MC to move along his/her arc the right way, then it has to happen. Heck, sometimes the MC ends up dying because it just has to be that way for the story to work.

I think the only character death I've been sincerely displeased with is Snape's. I really don't think Rowling needed to kill him for the arc to progress. But, it would have been a VERY different story had she let him live. And that clearly wasn't the story she wanted to tell.

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Donna Montgomery link
6/16/2013 03:37:51 pm

Once I get past the initial shock, I don't usually mind character deaths as long as they're meaningful and serve the larger story.

I do still have lingering resentment over one series that killed my favorite side character off-screen, then spent the entire next novel dropping teases about how that death might have been faked. When the final verdict was "nope, still dead," it felt gratuitous and kind of mean.

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Cocab Galaxy link
9/9/2017 08:01:40 am

What book was it?

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John
6/17/2013 04:52:42 am

With GRRM, he killed off one of the main Characters (or so he appeared to be) at the Red Wedding but he really wasn't a MC......instead you get Theon Greyjoy still alive after 5 books as well as Cercei and a host of other so-called 'bad guys' but not much in the way of 'Heroes'......his writing is much more reflective of real life than it is of fantasy writing, only the world he creates is fantastical....

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Kellie
2/12/2014 01:01:59 pm

I'm not an author, but I'm a lifelong reader. I read fantasy books to escape. If I want real life, I have plenty of that. I read books to be inspired and feel good. I want to feel great at the end of a book or a series. Once in a great while I can tolerate a death if there's great meaning in it, such as in "Moreta." But overall Anne McCaffrey doesn't make it a habit to kill of main characters, so I trust her. The thing is, there have been plenty of fabulous books written in the past that had no need to kill off main characters. I'm actually tired of feeling betrayed by authors these days. Sadly, it seems it's become so fashionable to get people to bond with main characters and then kill them off that I'm considering giving up on the fantasy genre.

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