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ONE SWING COULD CHANGE EVERYTHING
I rest my backside against the porch railing, a dangling cigarette between my fingers, letting my thoughts grow more agitated as I watch my husband through the window.
He laughs at something on the television, unaware of how carefully I’ve begun to study his routines, his idiosyncrasies, and the simple yet overly boring structure of his life. I take a long drag, letting out the smoke slowly, and eye the ax kept for splitting wood, its weight and reason no longer just practical in my mind. I tell myself I’m only imagining it—how easily one swing could change everything—but even as the thought keeps returning, I wonder if I'm truly capable of something so vile and barbaric. The air suddenly feels heavier now, thick with every small cruelty I’ve swallowed and every silence I’ve kept over the years. Even as I put out the butt of the cigarette, grinding it into the dirt with the soul of my shoe, I realize I haven’t decided what direction my life will take—only that I've decided something will change tonight.
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Angela Scott
3/21/2026 06:32:54 pm
That's what I was going for :) Thank you!
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Angela Scott
3/21/2026 06:33:15 pm
Thank you! I appreciate it!
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3/20/2026 12:53:53 pm
I recommend stop being so offended. He likely loves you far more than you respect him. Forget the cigarettes and start enjoying some time together with him.
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Angela Scott
3/21/2026 06:37:07 pm
Hmmm...quite the assumption. I think it is well beyond that point for this character. But it is advice to consider should she decide murder is off the table.
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Angela Scott
3/21/2026 06:38:11 pm
Not very dramatic at all. Though...less prison time for sure, if she were caught :)
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Angela Scott
3/21/2026 06:39:38 pm
But where's the fun in that :) I suppose it would be less prison time...something she should consider.
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messymimi
3/22/2026 12:18:42 pm
Leaving is less messy and brings fewer investigations, but I get the feeling she's not thinking in that direction.
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3/29/2026 08:12:54 am
Wow. So good! I love how you pack so much into each sentence.
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