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CHILLED WHISPERS I had only meant to walk along the edge line of the darkening forest. Now, the branches of the trees hung thick overhead, knitting together to obscure my view of the sky and hinder the light of the moon. The woods had drawn me in, circling, tightening, guiding me deeper – the path becoming a perilous influencer. Each foot placement I took was matched by another, a synchronized march mimicking mine, stepping when I stepped and pausing when I rested, though I was certain I had entered the forest alone. I turned quickly around, trying to catch what followed me, and saw nothing – just as I had expected – and released my breath. But when I began my slow journey again, trying to find my way out of the tree of mazes, chilled air brushed against my ear and whispered, “I think... you already know... how this... is going... to end.”
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anmonroe
3/26/2026 07:40:35 am
YES! Always carry a big stick! Great advice!
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anmonroe
3/26/2026 07:41:08 am
That's what I was going for ;)
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anmonroe
3/26/2026 07:41:24 am
;) Thank you!
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Chris Hall
3/26/2026 02:08:43 am
Ooh good one!
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anmonroe
3/26/2026 07:41:51 am
Thank you!
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anmonroe
3/26/2026 08:03:04 am
Appreciate it! Thanks!
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Angela Scott
3/27/2026 10:08:28 am
For me, whatever wanted to kill me wouldn't have a chance because I'd drop dead right then and there after piddling myself :) 3/26/2026 08:20:18 am
Oh my, gosh how spooky. I had this feeling in my tummy, like something dropped at the last line. I think I would start sprinting instead if marching at this point.
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messymimi
3/26/2026 06:33:49 pm
Going past the edge of the trees without light and defense is not for the faint of heart.
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anmonroe
3/27/2026 10:09:28 am
Right? Ya, I'm no fool. I'm not going in there. I've watched too many horror shows to know better :)
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3/28/2026 07:11:44 am
Nicely done, Angela! Especially the branches knitting. If anything is deserving of anthropomorphism, it's trees on the edge of a darkening forest. This reader? Suitably spooked!
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